Brain Gym at Cardinal Wiseman

Brain Gym took 15 students to Cardinal Wiseman for a writing workshop this week. The Year 5s and 6s had to write a short story which was revised and edited by Year 9 student leaders;they were given a range of tips and tricks such as using pathetic fallacy to improve their descriptive writing. Children were very positive about these mentors teaching them how to uplevel their work and how to engage readers with a true author’s voice. Zach fed back, “he (Ben) taught me so much in such little time!”

 

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